Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on Jun 13, 2009 13:42:13 GMT 10
Poetry Competition Rules
1. All entries must be written/ composed by the entrant, with the exception of poems written by friends with their permission. In this case the author's email address must be sent to me via Personal Message so I can email them and check. 2. Entrants posting poetry that is not their own or that they are not authorised to post will lose 1 Karma and be disqualified from the comp. 3. You may vote for yourself if you wish. 4. Poetry that is disturbing, inappropriate or degrading will be deleted, and the entrant will recieve a warning. If they repost it they will be disqualified and lose 1 Karma 5. One entry per competition
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on Jun 14, 2009 19:33:02 GMT 10
I wrote this in grade 6!
I didn't have the guts to put it on the site but here goes!
[glow=red,2,300]Buried Alive[/glow]
Inside that feeling of depression..........
It's not just a silly superstition...........
It's hard to make this confession........
I'm buried alive.................
I believe that no one can help me to survive.............................
I'm sick of this pathetic life...............
And I think it's all based on a horrible big lie..................
Still there laying there
Inside that fearful place.....
Where a feeling of death hung upon the air..........
Oh god this is so unfair.............
My life has become an abhorrent endless nightmare................
Inside that gloomy place...
Where every thing is dark and..........
And the sun will never shine upon my pale face................
oh god how can I get rid of all these choking scares? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
How can I get out of this frightening place............?
So hard to get rid of the weight of these feeling laying inside my brittle poor heart...........
This feeling of depression it makes me fall apart..........
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Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on Jun 18, 2009 8:36:50 GMT 10
Angel
I sent an angel to watch over you, to keep you safe from harm he was back before the night was through I asked him what was wrong
He replied and said, "Angels don't watch other angels, you see." "What defines an angel?" I asked He gave me reasons three
"An angel has the strength within to fight when all seems lost, "an angel gives herself for others, whatever may be the cost
"An angel needs not blonde hair like mine, she needn't strum a harp and sing "what she needs is that inner shine, that love that glows within."
So next time you see an angel, know her by these things three: the courage to fight on through hell, a shining heart, and generosity.
My friend, you are one such angel, look in the mirror, can't you tell?
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Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on Jul 9, 2009 13:55:23 GMT 10
Competion closes the Friday after school goes back.
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Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on Jul 13, 2009 8:25:26 GMT 10
Only one entry per comp please Cass. U can enter that one in another comp in the future.
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on Jul 13, 2009 8:30:34 GMT 10
SORRY! You didnt specify!
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Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on Jul 13, 2009 8:31:15 GMT 10
Ok, sorry!
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Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on Jul 13, 2009 13:34:31 GMT 10
Which one would you prefer to be voted on?
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on Jul 14, 2009 7:06:55 GMT 10
I deleted the second one!
Do the first! It took me ages to write it!
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Post by The Fear/Rukia on Jul 16, 2009 13:34:03 GMT 10
Some day, Some time
I wish I could be your everything, your love, your life, and some day, some time your wife.
There was every time we spent. The time at each other's parties And the fun times at each other's place. Those times at school that whenever I saw your face. I knew I was in a better place. Those innocent times seem so far away.
Now we've grown up. The trouble time of Teenage-hood has taken over, and you've Found someone else. But somehow, someway You've got a hold of me that I can't describe, I can't breath. I've tried to put my feelings on a Shelf and say to myself "Get a grip, he doesn't Want you that way. Let go." And God knows I've Tried, I believe it in my head but I guess I can't Break it to my heart. I have at times wished that The other girl never existed. But I know you won't survive. I care about you because in my heart I know no one else Would love you the same, unless that person was me.
So I guess I'll have to wait here in my corner of darkness, But in my heart I hope we could be together someday, Sometime in another life.
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Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on Jul 26, 2009 14:09:00 GMT 10
Competition closed.
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on Aug 11, 2009 18:50:01 GMT 10
I win! Yay me!
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