Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on May 5, 2009 16:54:10 GMT 10
here is my collection of poetry so far that i have written myself, feel free to comment!
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Post by Pretzel on May 5, 2009 16:57:21 GMT 10
I had 2 write this 1 4 school (english, of course)
Wonderful women, those who care why must we fight to make men share?
why is it us who bear the pain? why must we fight to reap the gain?
why are we weak, where they are strong? why have we suffered for many years long?
come now sisters those who care keep up the fight were nearly there
for as we fight strongly, each day lessens the pain and as we fight boldly each day increases the gain
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 5, 2009 18:17:38 GMT 10
Go Girls!!!
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Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on May 13, 2009 13:25:20 GMT 10
hi guys i have a new poem for you, i wrote it for Rebecca but feel free to send it to any extra special friend you have: Angel
I sent an angel to watch over you, to keep you safe from harm he was back before the night was through I asked him what was wrong
He replied and said, "Angels don't watch other angels, you see." "What defines an angel?" I asked He gave me reasons three
"An angel has the strength within to fight when all seems lost, "an angel gives herself for others, whatever may be the cost
"An angel needs not blonde hair like mine, she needn't strum a harp and sing "what she needs is that inner shine, that love that glows within."
So next time you see an angel, know her by these things three: the courage to fight on through hell, a shining heart, and generosity.
My friend, you are one such angel, look in the mirror, can't you tell?
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Post by Missing my friends already. :( on May 13, 2009 16:33:07 GMT 10
I love them both. When's the next poem coming out?
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 13, 2009 16:45:31 GMT 10
Love it!!!
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Post by Missing my friends already. :( on May 15, 2009 21:46:36 GMT 10
Kelsey, I'm looking forward to the next one.
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 17, 2009 11:40:22 GMT 10
Same
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Post by Missing my friends already. :( on May 20, 2009 9:58:34 GMT 10
Take your time Kelsey though. We need that Brain (especially you)
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Post by Pretzel on May 20, 2009 11:39:21 GMT 10
yeah soon i have to remember to bring my poetry book, theres lots in there.
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 20, 2009 18:27:14 GMT 10
Cool!
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Post by Missing my friends already. :( on May 21, 2009 6:53:58 GMT 10
Looking forward to it.
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 21, 2009 7:05:11 GMT 10
same!
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Post by Missing my friends already. :( on May 21, 2009 14:28:14 GMT 10
LOL
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Post by Pretzel on May 21, 2009 15:14:27 GMT 10
All right, here goes: The freaks
Were not your cherry lipgloss girls or your ultra macho guys were the freaks, the nerds, the wimps all those whom you despise
Were a mix of people, a jumble among us you may find emos, smarties, muslims all those left behind
We don't conform unto your rites though we have none of our own We are abnormal, strange, wild victims of kindness not shown.
Something about us worried you uncalled differences made you frown So in your youth and naivety your response was to put us down
You made us the freaks, the monsters treated us like weeds, or diseased you forced us out to fend for ourselves to survive like wolves we appeased
So now youre sorry, but we dont care were wolves, around the edges we prowl we've survived through our own methods try to interfere and we'll growl
Because you used us as stepping stones and you stood on us to climb why should we now bend to the will of those who treated us like slime?
You try to make amends with us but we dont trust your people we'll play the game, we will pretend that your attempts arent feeble
We want nothing from you, we never have on your cast off we do not thrive your attention is not what we crave but of revenge we are deprived
Yes we stare, but its not admiration for behind our watching eyes we think with amusement that your fun will be done quick as a butterfly dies
For the wrong doers are not ours the bad guys belong to you the lot of you are your own undoing we cant wait till youre through
Maybe it sounds like were threatening you but youre not lambs and you know it we're the wolves and you are tigers canine and feline, were opposite
We'll stand back and watch you go and when youre gone we'll be freed after you were ready for the world for we've become a tougher breed
As the wolves we ought to thank you we will always remember you as the flashy girls and bad @$$ boys who showed us what not to do.
Unfortunately i can see this poem being very controversial, not in the least because not all of us survive and become a tougher breed. A lot of us are ruined and some of us even die at our own hands as a result of the treatment we receive from the "Tigers".
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 21, 2009 17:37:27 GMT 10
LOVE IT!!!
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Post by Missing my friends already. :( on May 22, 2009 5:54:17 GMT 10
Nice. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 22, 2009 6:30:09 GMT 10
I read the origanal!
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Post by Pretzel on May 22, 2009 12:20:12 GMT 10
It is the original
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 22, 2009 17:56:00 GMT 10
I know but i read the original from which that was copied from!
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Post by Missing my friends already. :( on May 25, 2009 12:49:35 GMT 10
Cassie, you make no sense what so ever.
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 25, 2009 20:37:10 GMT 10
When do i?
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Post by The Fear/Rukia on May 26, 2009 6:42:19 GMT 10
True that
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 26, 2009 7:14:32 GMT 10
LOL!
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Post by Missing my friends already. :( on May 27, 2009 8:36:26 GMT 10
Cassie, Can you try please
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 27, 2009 8:40:18 GMT 10
Tysonn loves me even when i dont make sense!!!!!!
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Pretzel
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Post by Pretzel on May 27, 2009 15:46:23 GMT 10
Lucky you!
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 28, 2009 6:59:57 GMT 10
U guys love me when i dont make sense rite? Rite?
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Post by Missing my friends already. :( on May 28, 2009 8:42:33 GMT 10
Yeah. It's just easier if you make sense
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Post by Whisper My Fairytale on May 28, 2009 17:36:17 GMT 10
but then u dont know what im talking about its better that way?
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